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Ness
Posts : 792 Join date : 2012-08-19
| Subject: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Fri Aug 24, 2012 11:15 pm | |
| Name: Kane Demrosol Age: 17 Gender: Male Eyes: Gold/Yellow Hair: Blueish Black Skin Tone: Pale Body Type: Athletic God|Titan|Primordial Parent: Hades Mortal Parent: Mira Demrosol Siblings: Talents: He likes cemeteries, digging holes, and speaking with ghosts. Flaws: He holds grudges, doesn't like using swords, and can be a bit of a pushover. Powers: Umbrakinesis and Geokinesis. The biggest thing he can do with shadows is put out a large light, about 10 ft in diameter. He can use his power 10 times a day, they'll make him nearly pass out if he goes to his maximum once. He has to wait at least an hour between uses. Weapon: A special CB shovel that transforms from a charm on his bracelet. His bracelet's basically like Annabeth's invisbilty hat. Clothing: PIC^ History: Kane had an easy life. He lived in Japan for a year and learned Japanese. One day near his 17 birthday a Cyclops attacked him and his mother. He made it out alive, but his mother was killed. After hiding for a few months he heard about Camp Half-Blood and went there, fast as he could. RP Example: I heard the Minotaur bellow behind me. "Damn it. It's close." I said angrily. It bellowed again. I looked forward. The tree was around 50 away. Just then the Minotaur rammed into me. I fell down and felt that I had broke a few ribs. I tapped my bracelet and became invisible. The Minotaur looked confused. I carefully snuck behind it, carefully taking out my shovel. When I was directly behind it, I quickly decapitated it and watched it's body fade away. Picture: http://moe.animecharactersdatabase.com/uploads/chars/5688-617619611.jpg
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Alpha Wolf Elite Moderator
Posts : 631 Join date : 2012-08-18 Age : 27 Location : I'm fucking everywhere, dude.
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:14 pm | |
| Uhm
I'll be straight up about this. Nico is a Canon/Gary Stue-esque character. If this character has ALL his powers then you have to flat out name them and limit them. Not give the short and simple term for a mass of different powers. | |
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Ness
Posts : 792 Join date : 2012-08-19
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:15 pm | |
| I'll just keep the umbra and geokinesis. Edited. | |
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Alpha Wolf Elite Moderator
Posts : 631 Join date : 2012-08-18 Age : 27 Location : I'm fucking everywhere, dude.
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:17 pm | |
| You still have to explain the powers and limit them.... | |
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Ness
Posts : 792 Join date : 2012-08-19
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:22 pm | |
| Edited. | |
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Hammah
Posts : 351 Join date : 2012-08-18 Age : 26 Location : Parkway Drive
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:59 pm | |
| The geokinesis power needs to be limited more. | |
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Ness
Posts : 792 Join date : 2012-08-19
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Wed Aug 29, 2012 6:22 pm | |
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Skinny Love Elite Moderator
Posts : 74 Join date : 2012-08-18 Location : 221B Baker Street. With a mustache. *like a sir*
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Wed Aug 29, 2012 9:20 pm | |
| The powers still need more limits, like how tired they make him, how long he has to wait between uses, how many times he can use them, stuff like that. | |
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Ness
Posts : 792 Join date : 2012-08-19
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Wed Aug 29, 2012 9:29 pm | |
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Strormageddon Admin
Posts : 743 Join date : 2012-08-18 Age : 29 Location : Wouldn't you like to know?
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sun Sep 02, 2012 4:20 am | |
| . .I don't know why no one mentioned this, or if they just didn't view it the same way, but geokinesis isn't a Hades power. Gaia wouldn't let him mess with her shit. | |
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Ness
Posts : 792 Join date : 2012-08-19
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sun Sep 02, 2012 10:03 am | |
| Hades does have slight geokinesis powers being that everything underground is in his power. | |
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Strormageddon Admin
Posts : 743 Join date : 2012-08-18 Age : 29 Location : Wouldn't you like to know?
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sun Sep 02, 2012 3:51 pm | |
| Moving large boulders, ten times a day, for his child, is too much if he only has "slight power" over it. Everything under the Earth is his dominion, not his power. Hades, Zeus, and Poseidon were given equal reign over the earth because Gaia was still present. If Hades gets geokinesis, so do Zeus and Poseidon, which makes much less sense. | |
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Ness
Posts : 792 Join date : 2012-08-19
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sun Sep 02, 2012 5:30 pm | |
| URGH. Forget it then. Edited. | |
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Strormageddon Admin
Posts : 743 Join date : 2012-08-18 Age : 29 Location : Wouldn't you like to know?
| Subject: Re: Transfer!~Kane Demrosol Sun Sep 02, 2012 6:17 pm | |
| Sorry. Approved.
You didn't remove the part that says 'geokinesis' | |
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