Zoey Tressa Danes and Adam Vitelan (WIP)

Demi-God Form:
Full Name:Zoey Tressa Danes
Nicknames:Commando Zoey
Age:15
Years At Camp:6

Picture (Optional):
Hair (Length, color, style, etc.):Down to her neck, red, and in pigtails
Eyes:Black
Body Type (Height, weight, etc.):5"4, 102 lbs, and slim
Distinct Markings (Freckles, scars, birthmarks, etc.):N/A
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Personality (Friendly, mean, different, violent, etc.):

God Parent:Harpocrates
Mortal Parent:Janice Danes
Date of Birth:January 10th, 1997

Powers (optional):She can make people silent until she leaves the area. She chooses which person. She can do this 4 times a day. They have to be in a range of 6 yards. They can resist if they are not looking at her.
Fatal Flaw:Wrath (When somebody gets Zoey mad, you can prepare to hide. She's going to destroy a lot of things...)
Other Flaws (at least two others):Persists so much that it annoys people and ophidiophobia

Weapon(s):Ebony Bow and CB Arrows
Pets:N/A
Talents/Skills:Gymnastics, martial arts, and stealthiness

RP Example: Zoey ran across the fields over to a tree. She climbed onto the tree and looked around the plains. She saw a tree nymph and apologized quickly. She jumped off the tree and walked back. She saw something form. It was a monster. Uh oh. Zoey ran as fast as she could until she got to the entrance of camp. She entered the camp with the monster trailing behind her, lost. Zoey waited to see if the monster would come any closer. She ran into the gate after a few moments of waiting.
Biography: Zoey lived in Monterey with her mother, evil step-father, and big brother. She loved being outside to get away from his step-father since her step-father hated being outside. Her step-father was a lazy asshole, so he usually sat down on a couch and watched TV while he made Zoey, and her brother, Blake, do everything for him. Zoey loved to go outside with Blake, so she could make him play with her. Blake always had to because their mom was at work basically twenty-four seven. When her mom got home, she would let Blake and Zoey rest and read a book or something. While their dad couldn't boss them around, Zoey exercised outside. Since it was nighttime, nobody could notice her. One day at school, Blake met a satyr and the satyr, named Lynn, told him that he was a demigod along with his sister. Blake took Zoey and they went to CHB. It was a long trip, but they made it safely... Somehow. Zoey has lived there ever since.

Other Notes:
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Demi-God Form:
Full Name:Adam Vitelan
Nicknames:N/A
Age:14
Years At Camp:3

Picture (Optional):
Hair (Length, color, style, etc.): To his shoulders, blond, and buzz cut
Eyes: Cyan
Body Type (Height, weight, etc.):6"2, 114 lbs, and fit
Distinct Markings (Freckles, scars, birthmarks, etc.):N/A
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Personality (Friendly, mean, different, violent, etc.):

God Parent:Baldr
Mortal Parent:Ally Vitalan
Date of Birth:October 10th, 1997

Powers (optional):He can manipulate light. The most powerful thing he could do is give a person a sunburn.
Fatal Flaw:Trusts too easily
Other Flaws (at least two others):Almost always sleepy and is a loner

Weapon(s):Celestial Bronze Sword
Pets:N/A
Talents/Skills:Singing, Dancing, and Playing Instruments (He can play almost any kind.)

History:
RP Example:

Ok, First off I know this is WIP, but yeah, No to the powers because you are giving no way of people resisting this power.

I was thinking of a way for them to resist.